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Showing posts with label writing 2018. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing 2018. Show all posts

Wednesday, 17 October 2018

Start of term four

Walt: use correct sentenecs to help stucture our writing.Well the holidays are finished, no more staying up late and playing fortnite, uhhh.It’s the start of a new term today and at the start of every term we get a new topic.This term our topic is te wā toi wich means it’s art time.

This term is so exciting for the following reasons, The Manaiakalani Film Festival, Athletics, Year 6 camp, and Prizegiving. These are the more exciting things but they are way more that I haven't listed. I am most excited about the Manaiakalani Film Festival which is an event that point England school attend every year and its were every class in our school gets to create our own movie to put on the big screen at the hoyts movies therete.

One of my goals this term is to become a better drawer, Currently I am an average drawer and i what to change that. But I am a very good sketcher but don't really excel in painting. Another one of my goals that I would like to do more often is to get better at my writing, right now I am at my level for writing but I would like to go above and beyond and pass my level.

Because this term is about art I would love to learn about the history of famous art and artist such as Picasso and paintings like the Mona Lisa. Famous art museums would also be interesting to explore our leaning in because we get to research the history of ancient artefacts. We could also learn about why the artist were inspired to create their art.

What an exciting term that have ahead of us. I am looking forward to the Manaiakalani Film Festival, improving in my art, and hopefully learning about the history of famous art and artist. Overall I can't wait to blog about this You to be exciting to term.

Task description: For this task we wort about our goals and expitionshions for this term. We also learnt how to write a proper conclusion. I was very scared about my writing because It was the first day back from school and I was not sure that I had proper sent and.

Monday, 8 October 2018

My new guinea pig

So this holiday me and my sister got a guinea pig his name is custard. We called it custard because he was the same color as a custard. We bought him a hose and filled it with hay, we also got everything you need  to provide for a guinea pig . We also took some photos for you to look at.⤵️

Thursday, 20 September 2018

Creative Writing

Walt: write using humour.
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So we start at the beginning, the very beginning, the creation, of the universe. Before the universe was created there was nothing except the bag of life the only physical object created, the bag of life granted you the power of eternal life and also granted you the power of creating life. One day the bag of life started shivering and something was wrong suddenly a light appeared then came out the one we now call ancient one.

The ancient one is a intellectual being that protects the bag of life. As the ancient one was at the age of 3060 she learnt how to control the bag of life.  It took her a couple of times but she finally created the Galaxy.

Seven trillion years came by and it was time for the ancient one to pass away it was a sad time, after four months of trying to stay alive she finally passed away. Because of this no one was guarding the bag of life so everyone that thought that they could capture the bag of life tried. They were searching and searching but no one ever find it, after four years of searching a army finally found it, well let's say two armies.

The two arms declared war upon echarter so they all charged into battle knowing that their life will be at risk, the two leaders of the armies were named Twinkle Toes the 3rd and
King Port - A - Fart. These were the most mightiest heroes in the galaxy, Twinkle Toes the 3rd charges on a horse, the horse trips on a rook and and Twinkle Toes the 3rd falls into poop and his response is “wow that is some good poop”. There is only half of the men in the each army and Twinkle Toes the third and King Port - A - Fart are worried.

After everyone in the army is killed off Twinkle Toes the third and King Port - A - Fart charge on there mightie horses but suddenly a beam of light apers the world started shaking the rock’s are scrambling the waters were floating then out of nowhere the bag of life spawn in the the ancient one, the ancient stops time, and then changes the whole timeline to where she didn't die and no one tried to chapter the bag of life every again.

Twinkle Toes the 3rd

King Port - A -fart

Image result for bag of life pngThe bag of life
Link to Toby's version of the war over King Port - A - fart and Twinkle Toes the 3rd (LINK )
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Task description for this task given the opportunity to do some creative writing. Our story had to have a
beginning middle and end Which is a linear plot story. Then we had to post it on a blog with the Task description
and walt.

Tuesday, 11 September 2018

Monster Character Descriptions

Walt: Understand the text from the perspectives of the characters

Task description: For this task we were given monsters that we had to describe using interesting vocabulary. We got to choose two monsters out of four and I chose these two. Then we had to post it on our blog with a task description and a walt.

Monday, 2 July 2018

Chicago Deep Dish Pizza


Mr Goodwin sat down to order his first Deep Dish Pizza. Only the chef had something different in mind for Mr Goodwin’s pizza. Instead of the usual ingredients like cheese, tomato, and ham. The Chef instead used Deep fried fish guts, poached eggs, Horse poo, grass, rats, a poison cat, cockroaches, a live chicken, octopus tentacles, Tobys stinky feet and broccoli in other words the double deluxe special Mr goodwin could smell a hint of his fine meal that he was going to be served. The chef served it to mr goodwin with a smile and a grin on his face Mr Goodwin immediately pulled his hands out of his pockets and got ready to taste chicago's famous  pizza the double deluxe special he took a bite ,“ very, crunchy,” he said it was only a matter of seconds before, (!&*%#)@%$) all his food went right out of his mouth it was horrific show. Mr Goodwin shattered with stairs “what was in there he cried” “oh nothing much fish broccoli just the casual” “IS THAT WHAT YOU CALL CASUAL!” I have you know that this is the best reviewed pizza we ever had”. Mr Goodwin went to his house to take a shower when he was clean he went back to the restaurant to file a complaint that's when everything went wrong, people keep laughing at him and called him puke face Mr goodwin cried like a baby Mr Goodwin was never seen in the restaurant again (3 days later) Mr goodwin was calt at the airport he was waiting in line and when he finally got his ticket a man noticed him and he started shouting everyone it's puke face Mr Godwin started running and when he looked back every one was chasing him, Mr Goodwin was approaching the airplane but he tripped he started crying but he was determined to get to the plane he ran the plane was shutting it was only a matter of time befor it shuts he jumps and he made it Mr Goodwin was laughing at the people outside on his window and one man smash the window and Mr Goodwin got scared and cryed like a baby so he ran to the back of the plane Mr Goodwin was never seen in Chicago agen.

Thursday, 7 June 2018

Littel Red Ridding Hood

Walt: Write from a certain perspective.

 


Once upon a time a girl named scarlet appel candy the third / red riding hood was and she was skipping around her home death valley, it was a horrible place filled with ugly bunnies as fat as toads and as hairy as bigfoot and that's just some of the problems there. Little Red Riding Hoods mum was a horrible lady when she was a kid her little sister Daisy was very successful and she was jealous of her success. The father spoil Daisy more than you could imagine so one day Little Red Riding Hood's mum left and started her own family somewhere else.


One day out of the blue the mum was cooking some honey cakes and little red riding hood was very surprised because the mum despise honey cakes because they were her father's favorite food “ohh little red riding hood” the mum cried “please come here said the mom” “of course mother” little red riding hood replied “I want you to give this to your dear old grandpa he is not feeling very well” “yes mother” “hangon I just have one little touch to put in” a dash of mums secret salt went in and Red Riding Hood was very scared. Red Riding Hood set off and she had to travel through the jungle of misery the cabin of death and through the vegetables of whooooo!!!!!. Little Red Riding Hood was getting around she finally made it to the Jungle of misery.


There was a very scary gorilla who was guarding the path. Little Red Riding hood asked if she could come through but the gorilla man said no. He said “only if you can answer this riddle Ok then bring What is my favourite food”. “That’s easy bananas” Said little red riding hood. “Incorrect two more chances before elimination / death” Said the gorilla “ok then how about apples incorrect one more question left before death becomes your best friend” , “um um um um um peanuts” Red Riding Hood said “you are correct just warning you it's a very scary place in there”.


When little red riding hood was sipping around the jungle of misery she saw a house in the distinct so she ran to it and she knocked on the door and no one replied so she barged right in without any permission she saw three bowls of porridge one was too cold one was too hot and the one in thhe middle was just!!! Right. So she gobbled up all of the porridge and she went up to the second floor and she saw three chairs one was very hard and one was very soft and one was just!! right so she sat on it and it and SNAPPED!! The c So she went up to the third floor and she saw a bed one was to hard and one was to soft and one was just right And she was so comfortable that she fell right asleep.a couple minutes later three bears walked in the door one Mama Bear one Papa Bear and one Baby Bear someone ate my porridge said the Baby Bear so they went up to the Second floor and baby bear screamed someone broke my chair and Little Red Riding Hood woke up because she heard that horrible scream she was very familiar with that voice so she open the window and ran right out.The bear’s went up to the third floor and they saw a window open and Baby Bear's bed was very wrinkly Papa Bear Mel the window and smell the bed and there was only one person to describe the smell Red Riding Hood they all screamed!!!! Well get This is not the end.


She made it to the chasm of death it was no that scary it just had lots of dust she went past it and nothing really happened so she keep on skipping. She finally made it to her Grandpa's house the vegetables of Whoo!! Grandpa lives in the big carrot next to the cabbage he went inside and knocked on the door “come in” said the Grandpa so she went wright in and something was wrong with the look of grandpa “what big ears you have” said Little Red Riding Hood “only to hear you better my darling” said the bear What big eyes you have Grandpa only to see better what big nose you have said only to smell you better. Little red riding Hood said  what big teeth you have only to eat your cakes better right, ok grampa here you are and the bear took a nibble and he jumped up with his teeth right open and he grabed Red ridding hood but snap the bear died right in front of her because mums secret salt was poisonous.
                              
                     And that is the real story of littel red ridding hood. By the big bad wolf

The end


The end

Task description:

For this task we had to get an original fairy tale and rewrite it in our own words I chose Little Red Riding Hood and we also had to keep the main bits of the fairy tale in the twisted version.


Thursday, 22 February 2018

My little egg friend





When I went to school I thought it was going to be an ordinary day but no.

My teacher said “that we were going to be drawing a face on a egg,” he also said “that when were done making our egg friend were going to do a mission!!”

Has this ever happened to you?.

If you don't know what happened when I went to school my teacher Mr Goodwin brought some eggs to school!!. Mr Goodwin told us that we were going to draw a face on a egg and call it our little egg friend. Mr goodwin made himself a little friend and he asked us to name it for him, and marika said “let’s call it Bob” and everyone was laughing so hard we all nery wet our pants. On my egg i gave him a big beard, curly hair, a fat nose and a small mouth it looked very cool. I thought it was so ugly I laugh. I was not very proud of my drawing at the start but then I had a good look at it and face just lit up with joy. I named my little egg friend dave.

We went outside and lined up Mr goodwin said “to cratull our eggs” and then we walked to the park but I whet slow because I was so scared that I was going to drop it. The class was being so loud that Mr goodwin told us to sit down then he looked at me and walked up to me and I thought that I was in trouble but he was not looking at me and he whet to the kid behind me. I was so relieved. We finally got up and went to the park I dropped me egg but I catched it before it hit the floor then Mr goodwin looked bake and I whet startup without him looking at me.

When we were at the park we got into groups and we got in lines me and my friend toby were having a long conversation about who was going to go in front and both of us didn't want to go in front but went. We took a photo of 5 kids including me and then we took our eggs on a little tour on the park.I didn't want to climb the monkey bars because I was scared that I was going to drop Dave so I just ran on the floor but everyone didn't for some resin and I was like what are you thinking.but then I got bord so I did’t care any more so i climed At the end 4 kids dropped there eggs and there names are Caleb Lennox Aj and Ezra. They were told to go and clean themselves and Mr was outrageous and Caleb was starting to cry I felt so sorry for him.

This is the peopul who broke there eggs

Thursday, 15 February 2018

A Polluted Future

Walt: use what we already know to make meaning within a story.

Task Description:For this task I had to make a beautiful picture look ugly then we had to share this task and write a letter to one of our friends and I chose my friend Toby.

Monday, 5 February 2018

The Beginning of 2018

Walt :Make sure that I am bing Cybersmart



Task Description:
For this task we had to make a presentation above. We filled out each slide and wrote about thing that related to us and our families . We had to to use different online tools to do so.